Which Essay is Better?

<p>I have written three different 500 word essays for the common app. If you are interested in reading them, post and I will PM you. Thanx</p>

<p>Violin
“I stood there, overpowered by intense nervousness and excitement. What was a split second seemed to have lasted centuries as a million thoughts dashed through my mind. What if it ended up sounding…”</p>

<p>First Time Skiing
“The din of my strident, piercing scream reverberated across the fields. Millions of eyes were pressing in on me as I glared helplessly at the fence in front of me, praying for my skies to slow down. Unable to stop, I crashed straight into the…”</p>

<p>Auntie Kwan
“Aunt Kwan was the epitome of every human quality I disliked. From a very young age, I viewed with disdain her materialistic lifestyle, her superficial thinking, and her indifference to matters of profundity. It caused me great annoyance to see the beginnings…”</p>

<p>I’m up for a (hopefully) good read</p>

<p>I’ll take a look.</p>