Which essay should I use? Anyone mind reading 2 (short) essays?

<p>I am stuck on which essay to use for the common app. I would love it if someone would read mine for me and help decide - they are 500 words and 560 words so not too long of a read.</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

<p>Anyone? I don't need grammatical/advice on the essay itself, just which one is better.</p>

<p>Sure. Send it to me via PM and I'll give you my opinion on your essays.</p>

<p>ok sure. pm me.</p>