who wants to read my essay?

<p>PM if you're interested!
I would really appreciate some feedback</p>

<p>here's a sneak peak of it:</p>

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And then: “BOOM”... I woke up shaking, with sweat dripping sown my forehead. What was this dream about? Who was this man and why did that feel so real? Tons of questions were running through my mind as my heart was thumping furiously. That’s when my mother came into my room and urged me to get dressed. Today was a special day she said, we are going to vote!
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