Who would be so kind as to offer an eye and a brain...

College Essays
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<p>…to read and comment on my essay? </p>

<p>This is a revised version of the one I gave out when I posted my other thread a few nights ago. A bit different.</p>

<p>Let me know and I’ll PM it to you.</p>

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<p>OK. Now that this is in the right section, who wants to read? :D</p>

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<p>I got impatient and submitted my app. I hope it is good lol. Oh well.</p>