<p>Please be honest.</p>
<p>Ill gladly help.</p>
<p>Your essay isn’t like a peer review in a high school class – it’s just too important for something like that. </p>
<p>Admissions Officers are reading student essays to get a better sense of an applicant’s “character.” That’s an old fashioned word, it means the way you develop your inner qualities: intellectual passion, maturity, social conscience, concern for community, tolerance, inclusiveness and love of learning. </p>
<p>You should show your essay to one of your teacher’s writing your recommendation letter, as Admissions Officers look for a teacher to reinforce and confirm the “character” projected in a student’s essay.</p>
<p>If you still want a reader, I’ll help out.</p>
<p>Willing to read if you still want help. Good luck!</p>
<p>Sure. I’d like to help!</p>
<p>If you still want more feedbacks, i’ll help.</p>