Why Duke essay about speedo guy?

<p>Hey all,</p>

<p>I recently wrote my Duke supplement about how I first became interested in Duke through speedo guy, but was eventually hooked by the amazing academics. Would anyone like giving it a quick read through (it is only 2 paragraphs) to tell me whether or not it is too risky, and also looking for writing errors?</p>

<p>Thanks,
J</p>