<p>For Carnegie Mellon, they ask you to write an essay about what made you choose your major, why you want to major in it, what your goals are for the future, etc.
I am a prospective theatre major. Would anyone be willing to read it over and tell me what you think? I am just worried that the essay is too straight forward for a theatre major. I really like it but my parents think it’s too plain and not creative enough. PM if you are willing to help.
Thanks!</p>
<p>i’ll read it</p>
<p>PM me</p>
<p>pm me
i’ll read it</p>
<p>there’s nothign wrong with straight-fwd. I don’t knwo who puts this crud into ppl’s head that it has to be that anecodtal form. My goodness!</p>
<p>My cousin is on a full scholarship to an excellent school and did her essay straightfwd</p>
<p>I’d like to read it. I’m not applying to a theater major nor am I applying to CMU.</p>
<p>pm me I’ll read it</p>