Why NYU - 1500 characters.

<p>Hey, I like salad.</p>

<p>Is anyone willing to critique/edit my Why NYU essay? I normally ask friends/family to help me out, but right now I'm in a bit of a situation. </p>


<p>I like salad too. </p>

<p>Feel free to send me a PM. I can give some input.</p>

<p>I sent thee a PM</p>

<p>I'll take a look at it if you wish. I'm applying to NYU as well, I guess you should know, but I already finished mine.</p>

<p>Sorry to post here but, I am doing the same thing as you right now and I have a question.
Would it be weird to refer to the reader in the middle of the essay? Like saying "as you may already know" or something like that?</p>

<p>Also, I wouldn't mind reading yours over if you would feel comfortable with it.</p>

<p>Well, I no longer need more advice. I already got enough REALLY valuable advice already. But thanks for all your concern guys :). I'll post incase I need help for the other two</p>