<p>Please someone help me correct the grammar of my short answer for Yale ASAP.
I will PM if you’d like me to . Thank you</p>
<p>Edit: </p>
<p>If you send it before 8, I can send it back today. Else, I can’t insure it gets to you before the 31st.</p>
<p>Don’t you mean ensure?</p>
<p>please … don’t pick on him</p>
<p>Odd that correcting one’s spelling/grammar (I’ll give him the benefit of the doubt) is picking on him if he’s saying he’ll help correct YOUR grammar…</p>
<p>hehehe now someone’s criticizing :)</p>
<p>i am confused about the short answer, do i mention one specific attribute of Yale that interests me or should it be a broader summary?</p>
<p>you get 50 words, how are you gonna make it broader?</p>
<p>I’ll help but I’m sure everyone here has already ripped up the essay and fixed every grammar error imaginable.</p>
<p>btw, is the deadline 30th Dec 11:59 PM or 31st Dec 11:59 PM?</p>
<p>the second one</p>
<p>Kle- in case you’re not done with it yet, just a tip-off that it doesn’t have to be 50 words. mine was 73 and it fit into the space just fine…just be sure to print-preview to make sure it doesn’t get cut off. oh, and i got into yale ea, so this info actually is relevant.</p>
<p>thanks. so about the short answer, i’ve just written it and it’s ever so slightly extravagant in its praise of Yale. i hope that’s not a problem? Or am I worrying too much?</p>
<p>well its good to sound interested…but don’t sound like you’re trying to ingratiate yourself to yale…</p>
<p>Darn! I submitted it and now that I think of it, it does sound a bit like I’m trying to ingratiate myself to them (mainly because I was afraid I would come across as disinterested lol). It’s well-written though; and I know Yale don’t value interest shown much, but they won’t give negative marks for it will they?</p>
<p>I want to go to Yale because it would bring great honor to my family. After Harvard and MIT, my parents would be most proud of me going to Yale. </p>
<p>^thats a good esssay right there. You can just feel the honesty.</p>