<p>Hey everyone! </p>
<p>I just overhauled my essay a ton! Could anyone help me out by reading it and giving some suggestions?</p>
<p>Schools I’m Applying To:
Boston University
Northeastern
Emerson
Ithaca
Qunnipiac
UMass Amherst
Endicott College</p>
<p>Respond and I’ll PM it to you! Please and thank you!</p>