Will CMU let me in?

<p>Hi, sorry if this is unoriginal. I am applying to the school of science. </p>

<p>Location: Public school in Houston. (20 something students with the highest GPA)
Ethnicity: Burmese-American</p>

<p>Here’s my copy/paste resume.</p>

<p>Awards
National Merit Commended Scholar: 11
National Youth Leadership Forum on Medicine – Public Health Finalist 11
All-State Orchestra: 10, 11 (Principal Violinist, 10), 12
Ranked #14 in Texas: 12
Orchestra Letterman: 9, 10, 11
1st Place Scholarship Grant to Carnegie Hall: 12
All-Region Symphonic Orchestra: 9, 10, 11
Golf All-District Player: 11
Golf Regional Qualifier: 10, 11
2nd Place Medalist Invtl.: 12
Youth & Government Distinguished Delegate: 10, 11
Youth & Government State Conference at Austin: 10,11</p>

<p>EC’s
Varsity Golf Team: 10,11,12 (Captain)
Orchestra: 9,10,11,12 (Concertmaster)
Youth and Government: 9,10,11,12 (Distinguished Delegate)
Teen Court: 11,12 (Judge)
Hospital Volunteer: 10,11,12
Houston Junior Golf Association: 10, 11, 12
National Honor Society: 11, 12
Tri-M Music Honor Society: 12
Spanish Honor Society: 11, 12
Mustang Mentors: 11, 12
Houston Youth Symphony: 9</p>

<p>GPA: 3.88/4.0 ; 6.4/6.5
Class Rank: 42/530 (top 8-10 percent)
SAT II’s: math2c - 640; biology - 630
SAT: M - 720; V - 670; W - 710</p>

<p>APs: World History - 3; US History - 4; English Comp - 3
This year I’ve been able to load up on more AP courses in my schedule, including: Bio, Cal BC, Econ, Govt, Spanish, and English Lit.</p>

<p>If someone could please edit my essay for the common application, I’d appreciate it very much :)</p>

<p>I guess your stats are those of IVY level, so you should easily be able to get in. You do not want to ask me to edit the essay because i didnt even take AP Lang!</p>

<p>i’m willing to take a look at your essay for the common app. i go to cmu and i although i cant say who gets in and who doesnt, it seems that with your stats you have a strong chance of getting it. don’t worry about it. feel free to drop me a message with ur email and i’ll email you back! good luck!</p>