Will someone read my transfer essay?

<p>Second-semester freshman transfer! I'm not really quite sure about what should go in my transfer essay. Anyone want to help me out by giving it a critical eye? </p>

<p>For a little context, I'm looking to transfer to Hampshire College or Clark U.</p>

<p>I'll PM you the essay if you're interested!</p>

<p>Also, I'll read your admissions essay back if you'd like!</p>

<p>Hey you can PM if you'd like! Reading college essays are some of my hobbies.</p>