Will UC admissions officers "get" this reference in my hook?

<p>I did 5 paragraphs for each my UC statements. 1st paragraph was some kind of intro / background information. Then I had body paragraphs to get the main points across. Finally I had a very small conclusions to just wrap everything up. (I didn’t restart my body paragraphs in my conclusion like a typical essay tho). I don’t really know what a short journalistic paragraph is. But I will say this. You should have a main topic for each of the 2 prompts and work on flushing them out of the fullest with each paragraph. </p>

<p>@senior0991 cuz your writing seems disconnected with reality. Like I said you are thinking way too much.</p>