Willing to peer edit essays

Anyone willing to read and critique my personal statement essay for the common application?
I will return the favor and critique yours!

Thanks!

I chose this topic: Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.

I don’t need one critiqued, but I will read yours!

I can take a read