<p>I’m writing an essay for UChicago using the pH prompt, and my opener is slightly conversational. I’m trying to think of other ways to approach it, but do you think this could be seen as gimmicky? I know many colleges want to hear voice to get to know you but is there a point where voice is too much?</p>
<p>Post the opener so we can see.</p>
<p>Get a second opinion - what you’re describing right now is a bit general. </p>
<p>Do NOT post any of your essay. If people ask, PM it to them.</p>