would any admitted student want to read my Essays?

<p>I feel like they are ok but I dont know how good they really are. Can you read it for me and give me some critique? be very HARSH if you have to be. If there is something I need to fix, I better fix it soon… I have two essays, one “for a roommate” and the other is the main one.</p>

<p>so… is there anyone willing to read? I will really appreciate your help.</p>

<p>I would be glad to. PM me?</p>

<p>I applied early action to Stanford!
I can read your essay’s if you would like me to. You can PM me or you can send me an e-mail.</p>

<p>mhmmmmmmmm</p>

<p>I got in EA. I’ll read.</p>

<p>OP, I caution you to make sure the people you’re sending your essays to actually got in. Out of the posters above, I only know that Oprah was admitted for sure. Be careful.</p>

<p>Hey, I am a junior.
Am I permitted to read yours?</p>