Would anyone be willing to harshly edit/discuss/review my Common App essay?

College Essays
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<p>I spent most of last weekend writing my Common App essay. It is still in a very rough and raw stage, but for the most part the content and subject are solid IMO. I am looking for a well-known poster to read my essay, preferably one who is already in or out of college. Thanks!</p>

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<p>i’ll do yours if you do mine&lt;/p>

<p>by do i mean rape</p>

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<p>lol, don’t pay money to edit a college essay.</p>

<p>send it over, i’m a sophomore at northeastern. Harsh critiques are my specialty :D</p>

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<p>bump (10 characters)</p>

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<p>i can do it for you.</p>