Would anyone be willing to look at my Princeton supplement essay?

Colleges & Universities Princeton University
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<p>Its the response to the quote</p>

<p>‘‘Some questions cannot be answered./ They become familiar weights in the hand,/ Round stones pulled from the pocket, unyielding and cool.’’

  • Jane Hirshfield, poet, Princeton Class of 1973</p>

<p>any takers? I will PM you the essay.</p>

<p>I realize the conclusion is weak right now, so if you comment on any one thing, I’d like some advice about how to end it. </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll take a look at it. You might want to tell me in your message how much you want me to do, because I may give you way more comments than I should if you don’t impose restrictions on my critique.</p>

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<p>Sure, I can take a look at it.</p>

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<p>He still hasn’t sent it to me, so don’t feel bad if you don’t get it for a while.</p>

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<p>i’d like to read it!</p>

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<p>sure, i’d love to read it :D</p>

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<p>Sure… I’d love to read it!!!</p>

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<p>Sure, send it over!!</p>

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<p>only if you want someone else to read it, I can, but you seem to have alot of willing people lawl</p>

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<p>I’ll have a read!</p>

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<p>please pm it to me</p>