<p>Anyone want to read and help me revise/give me some feedback on my supplement essay?</p>
<p>Sure I’ll do it.</p>
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Are you applying for UC also or are you admitted/accepted?</p>
<p>I’m applying this year, but not to UC.</p>
<p>Ahh I see. I need some ideas right now for the UC essays. Can you help me out? I’m writing a second draft to my essay so I’ll send it to you when I finish. But can you give me a few ideas for this question?</p>
<p>Salt, governments, beliefs, and celebrity couples are a few examples of things that can be dissolved. You’ve just been granted the power to dissolve anything: physical, metaphorical, abstract, concrete… you name it. What do you dissolve, and what solvent do you use?</p>
<p>I would love to read your essay if you would let me. I will do my best to give you honest feedback.</p>