Would anyone like to critique/ read my work of art

<p>If guys have a chance, could you read my “unique experiences” essay and make any suggestions, critiques, or comments.
Just don’t be to harsh! lol </p>

<p>I’ll PM it to you :)</p>

<p>bump. No one would like to help or read my experiences?!!? lol</p>

<p>haha ill take a look</p>

<p>yeah sure send it</p>