Would anyone like to critique/shorten my essay about hipsters? Please?

<p>Just post here and I’ll gladly PM you. Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>i’ll read it. PM me</p>

<p>bumping this up because I need to send this essay to a college for early action by tomorrow! help please!</p>

<p>buuuuuuuuuuuump</p>

<p>will do pm</p>

<p>need more readers still! ahhhh I don’t have much time left!</p>

<p>Haha sure :slight_smile:
I’ve previously critiqued several other essays on CC.</p>

<p>Sure, pm me!</p>