Would anyone like to give me feedback on my roommate essay?

Colleges & Universities Stanford University
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<p>That’s the only one I’m having trouble on. The rest I’ve got covered, but I’m not sure if writing an informal description of myself comes across as…boring. Haha. </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>Sure, pm me.</p>

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<p>Once again, I’m really sorry to be annoying but I am bumping this thread…does anyone else want to critique my essay?</p>

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<p>optimisticgirl92, the best way to get meaningful feedback on your essay is to run it by someone who knows you. Only those that know you can tell whether your essay conveys an accurate sense of the real you. Good luck.</p>

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<p>only those <em>who</em> know you, I meant to say. Can’t be using poor grammar when discussing essays. : )</p>

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<p>He’s right, but if you really want I’d look at it for you. Not sure, if this is relevant but I’ll be a freshman at stanford next year.</p>

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<p>Sure I can read it. I am a Stanford 2014’er, so the essays are still fresh in my mind!</p>