Would anyone like to give me their opinion on my college essay?

College Essays
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<p>Disclaimer: This is an uninspired last minute excuse of an essay that is for a test grade in my AP English class. I’m only a junior and my teacher made us write essays but I couldn’t come up with anything but my race at this point…</p>

<p>I’m sorry if its unoriginal or lame or whatever! I would just like some opinions so I know if it actually has some potential or not! </p>

<p>PM me if you would like to help! All help is appreciated</p>

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<p>I would help, but if you aren’t taking it seriously I don’t think I will or many others will… if you aren’t taking it seriously, why should I.</p>

<p>But if you want a better topic, then don’t write about your race. Instead, write about an experience you’ve had or an activity you like to do. One of my friend’s essays was about how she was obsessed with surfing.</p>