Would anyone like to review my essay? (please)

College Admissions
#1

<p>I'm not comfortable with posting my essay here for the world to see, but I would definitely e-mail it to any credible person who is able to give me some good insight.</p>

#2

<p>Any volunteers?</p>

#3

<p>I'd like to review it! <a href="mailto:kkripalani@gmail.com">kkripalani@gmail.com</a></p>