<p>It's an essay about my mother who impacted my life.. I'm not a good writer. The essay came out to be extremely long -- 827 words. I definitely need to shorten it. </p>
<p>Would anybody like to help out?
Also, if possible, would anyone like to brutally critique my essay? It would be greatly appreciated! </p>
<p>Here's the topic:
Write an essay in which you tell us about someone who has made an impact on your life
and explain how and why this person is important to you.</p>