Would Anyone Mind Commenting on My Essay?

<p>Hi guys,</p>

<p>I'd really appreciate someone evaluating my Stanford essay (I'll be using it for other schools as well). Post here and I'll email it to you (assuming you've opted to allow emails in your profile). Alternatively, email me at Raven at ultraSW.com.</p>

<p>Thanks so much!</p>

<p>(The only reason I'm not posting it here is because it contains many "identifiable" elements.)</p>

<p>PS - I'd be happy to return the favor, if you like!</p>

<p>ill read it. send it over.</p>

<p>Thanks! It looks like you've disabled both emails and private messages in your profile.. how would you like me to send it?
Thanks again =)</p>

<p>sure I'll be happy to evaluate it: <a href="mailto:leely888@yahoo.com">leely888@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>have i? hmm i keep getting private messages anyway.
ill email you then</p>

<p>Whoops - <em>I</em> was the one who had disabled Private Message on my end. Don't I feel stupid! Anyhow, I've e-mailed you my essay. Thanks =)</p>

<p>your name isnt the same on the email, it is you though right?</p>

<p>i wont reveal the name incase that is what you were going for.</p>

<p>Name is Tyler, sorry, probabally should have signed it Raven001...</p>

<p>oh no, i just thought your name was raven, lol.</p>

<p>ill read it in a few minutes, gotta finish calc hw first! lol.</p>

<p>I replied in ur email =)</p>

<p>Thanks for the comments ranisparkle and leely888!</p>

<p>not a prob.. i can read your next draft if you like</p>

<p>I'd be glad to read it: <a href="mailto:myoung8@comcast.net">myoung8@comcast.net</a></p>

<p>run4fun.. you have mail -- thanks!</p>

<p>What kind of topics is everyone using for the intellectual essay?</p>

<p>i used a book i read this summer.</p>

<p>send me ur essay id love to take a gander and maybe u could peak at mine.</p>