<p>Hi guys,</p>
<p>I'd really appreciate someone evaluating my Stanford essay (I'll be using it for other schools as well). Post here and I'll email it to you (assuming you've opted to allow emails in your profile). Alternatively, email me at Raven at ultraSW.com.</p>
<p>Thanks so much!</p>
<p>(The only reason I'm not posting it here is because it contains many "identifiable" elements.)</p>
<p>PS - I'd be happy to return the favor, if you like!</p>