Would anyone mind editing my Common application essay?

College Essays
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<p>My essay is on topic #1 and i suppose it could be considered option #3 also. Its about lessons i learned from my best friend’s older brother.</p>

<h1>1. Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.</h1>

<h1>3. Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence.</h1>

<p>Please let me know and help me to perfect my essay.</p>

<p>I’m applying to several ivy’s and some States as well.</p>

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<p>Sure; PM it over. :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it and give feedback. PM it over.</p>

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<p>sure i’ll take a look and comment. PM it over :)</p>

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<p>i’ll read and comment if you like</p>

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<p>PM that ish</p>

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<p>ill take a look</p>