Would it be considered weak to...

<p>Would it be considered weak to write a common app essay detailing how everyday my view on society changes?</p>

<p>That would make an interesting essay, but remember that it is difficult to communicate your thoughts so that the reader understands them the way you do. Do you have something more concrete that you could write about? Maybe you could describe a particular experience that made you change your view on society. It is always good to have concrete details to help the reader understand your story.</p>

<p>doesn't sound weak at all! take musisat's advice though, make them see who you are.</p>

<p>thanks for the advice at least now I can go on knowing that my essay will be worth the effort</p>

<p>I think that's a good stance to take, especially if you wrote it in an "outside looking in" kind of way. That way, they'd really get a sense of who you are.</p>