Would love a reader for the Why Duke Short Essay

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<p>Hey Parents, </p>

<p>I have written by “Why do you want to go to Duke?” short essay, and was hoping somebody would be willing to read it over? I think it is different than the normal response, but I would love to get some feedback on the content as well as make sure there are no blatant punctuation errors. </p>

<p>It is only 2 paragraphs, and I could pm it to you if anybody would be so kind?</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>My son is a sophomore at Duke. I’d be glad to read it! :)</p>

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<p>Hey Berurah,</p>

<p>Thanks so much!</p>

<p>I just p.m.ed it to you.</p>

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<p>if still available, I’d love to take a look</p>