Would someone please give me some constructive criticism on my fishing-related Common App Essay?

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Thanks already for clicking my post! I would REALLY APPRECIATE some constructive criticism (don’t worry about my feelings) on my Common App essay (background/interest). Feel free to PM me!

Again, thanks so much!

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Yes - PM me.

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pm me! I’ll read yours if you read mine

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PM me!