Would you be willing to take a look at my essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hi CCers!
I am required to write an essay as a part of my application to the U.S. Senate Page Program, and I would love to receive some feedback before I send it in. The prompt is as follows:</p>

<p>Please attach a statement (not to exceed two pages) on why you want to be a
Senate page. </p>

<p>Of course, I would be more than willing to return the favor and take a look at your essay in turn. Please let me know if you would be interested!</p>

<p>Thank you so very much!</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to help you! I have extensive experience as a tutor and essay editor, so hopefully I can be a boon to you :D</p>

<p>PM me and I’ll give you my email address so you can send it to me via email.</p>

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<p>Awesome, thank you so much! I cannot tell you how much I appreciate your time :slight_smile: If anyone else would like to take a glance, even more insight would be welcomed :)</p>

<p>Thank you again!!</p>

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<p>I’d be willing :)</p>

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<p>sure! pm me and I’d be glad to take a look</p>