Would you guys like to critique my essay?

Colleges & Universities Yale University
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<p>I just finished rewriting the common app essay and would like to know what you guys think.</p>

2

<p>Sure, I’ll read it.</p>

3

<p>Sure, I’ll read it as well.</p>

4

<p>Me too (10 char)</p>

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<p>i want to read it, too.</p>