Would You Like To Read My College Essays?

<p>I finished the first drafts of my college essays. I would appreciate tips to improve my essays. The essay topics are
- Discuss some issue of local, national, or international concern and its importance to you. What are the challenges it raises, problems to be addressed, and hopeful outcomes?
- Tell us about personal, social, or family challenges you have faced. How have you dealt with them and how have they shaped your thinking?
Both are 500 words or less.
Any opinion is welcomed. :D</p>


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