<p>Mrs. Jones was formally head of the history department at Center High School.</p>
<p>of Center High School?</p>
<p>was formally? Doesn’t sound right</p>
<p>^I agree but I can’t think of any reason why. The last part seems correct.</p>
<p>It should be “formerly” instead of “formally”. They sound the same, but they have different meanings.</p>
<p>formally makes sense though… that sentence just implies that she holds the position for appearances sake, but doesn’t actually do the work. You can’t really call that an error.</p>
<p>I think GreedIsGood is ■■■■■■■■ us.</p>