Excel in supervising as well as motivating team players to increase productivity and company profitability.
AND . . .
Commended for performing well as both team player and an independed self-starter.
PLEASE SHOW ME CORRECT WAY TO WRITE WITH CORECT GRAMMER!
THX
This sounds a little better:
Excelled in supervising as well as motivating team players to increase productivity and company profitability, and
Commended for performing well as both team player and an independent self-starter.
you’re still wrong. there’s no noun. who excelled and or was commended? its basically a fragment.
The OP is inserting these fragments into a list of achievements which is likely headed with, “In my former position, I…”