<p>What exactly do adcoms want to see when it comes to the short answer question on the writing section that asks you to “elaborate on one of your activities?”</p>
<p>I really wasn’t sure so I wrote a sort of inner dialogue that I’m experiencing while performing. It goes into what musical theater really means to me and how I view it.</p>
<p>They want to see both that undertone that suggests your passion for whatever activity, and your ability to communicate succinctly. What you’ve done sounds like a very nice way of articulating your earnest engagement with musical theater, although be careful about useless waffle that can build up when taking a more creative approach,</p>
<p>Ok, thanks!</p>