wrong section BUT - is anyone willing to read my essay?

<p>I am torn between two essays I have written for the Common App. One is 500 words about diversity and the other is 560 and could work for either influential person or topic of your choice.</p>

<p>Is anyone willing to read these and tell me which you think is better?</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

<p>Anyone? I don't need grammatical/advice on the essay itself, just which one is better.</p>

<p>Yeah, I'll read it. :) Just PM me.</p>