Wrote a quarky (maybe too quarky) Common App Personal Statement... Readers?

Title says it all. I need some people to proofread this essay and tell me if it’s too weird, so I can know if I need to rewrite it in, well, a couple days.

Help. Porfavor.

Do you mean “quirky”? Or does it have something to do with Physics?

Lol just noticed that - my phone autocorrected it twice, and it doesn’t look like I can change it. I promise my essay has better grammar than the title! @intparent

If you’d like I will read it for content (not the best when it comes to recognizing grammatical errors) and let you know my take on it

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I’m a college senior but I don’t mind giving it a read! Send it over if you’re comfortable!

I’ll read, if you’ll read mine.