Yosemite Armstrong Scholar 2015

This is not a well known program and granted, most of you have probabaly never heard of it so here’s a summary:

Adventure, Connection, Empowerment

This extraordinary program seeks to inspire young women to reach their highest potential, develop a stronger sense of self and community, and explore their personal connection to nature. Participants venture into the backcountry of Yosemite National Park with highly skilled female educators from NatureBridge for an expedition of discovery, leadership, and personal challenge.

I am super pumped for my application and wondering if anyone is up to read it. I would really like to up the caliber of writing by improving sentence flow and essay content. Since the application is entirely written, the essays will make or break me.
Please PM me if you are interested. I am willing to read your essay if you want. It just helps to have a fresh eye.