yummy

Applying to College
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<p>Ok since the blood-supply to my brain has been cut off for the past several hours I am going to ask a stupid question:</p>

<p>is yummy a too informal word to use in this context “[I love slow walks on the beach]*. I love to draw, play volleyball, and make yummy transnational cuisines!” It sounds like a personal ad, doesn’t it? … but I wanted it to be within character limits… I am hungry :(</p>

<p>*eh… no.</p>

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<p>hmm…in an informal college essay its acceptable, but there are so many better options. Savory, unique, delicious, mouthwatering, succulant are a few i can think of off the top of my hed</p>

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<p>succulant… </p>

<p>great. =D thanks!</p>

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<p>I’d scrap “transnational” – you’re trying to hard. Either exotic or foreign would probably be a better word choice.</p>

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<p>In fact, the word “cuisines” should be replaced with “dishes” or a less pretentious equivalent.</p>

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<p>But let’s get the spelling right. It’s “succulent”.</p>