Hey Everyone, I’m a sophomore, and I’d really like to get into MIT, and Ivy League Schools. This is my second time posting, but a few things have changed. I’m applying as an Aerospace Engineering Major. Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
IMPORTANT
I’m a sophomore, so some of these things are planned, and not yet completed
Demographics
- US citizen
- Virginia (Loudoun County)
- Public Highschool + Magnet School, Academies of Loudoun Advanced AET Program
- Other special factors: Legacy? My grandfather went to NYU Stern for his MBA, and my uncle went to UPenn Wharton for his MBA. I’m not sure if this counts as legacy at all, or if it’d be of any use to me.
- Budget: (Not a concern)
Intended Major(s)
Aerospace Engineering
GPA, Rank, and Test Scores
- Unweighted HS GPA: 3.96 when applying
- Weighted HS GPA: 4.5 when applying
- Class Rank: My school doesn’t do class rank, but I’m probably getting top 10%
- ACT/SAT Scores: I’m taking the June SAT, hoping for a 1530+
List your HS coursework
7th:
Algebra 1: A-
Spanish 1: B+
8th:
Geometry: A+
Spanish 2: A+
9th:
Advanced Guitar Honors: A+
PE 9: A+
Algebra 2 + Trig Honors: A
Intro to AP World History Honors: A-
Research Biology Honors: A
English 9 Honors: A
Spanish 3: A
Summer Course:
PE 10: A+
10th:
Artist Guitar Honors: A+
AP Precalc BC: A
AP World History: A
Research Chemistry Honors: A
English 10 Honors: A
Intro to Engineering Design Honors: A+
Band Honors: A+
11th: (Every grade from here is planned)
Artist Guitar Honors: A+
AET AP Calc BC: A
APUSH: A
AET Physics (Honors): A
AP Lang: A
AET Engineering I (Honors): A+
Band Honors: A+
12th:
Artist Guitar Honors: A+
AET Multivariable Calc DE: A
AP Gov: A
AET AP Physics C Mechanics: A
AP Lit: A
AET Engineering II (Honors): A+
Band Honors: A+
Awards (Definitely my weakest section)
Trinity Grade 8 Certification w/ Distinction from Trinity College in London for Pop and Rock Guitar (International)
All Virginia Guitar 3x, also 3rd in my school to ever achieve. (State)
Hoping for Robotics State Win and/or Worlds Qualification (State/International)
TSA Award in CAD (State)
Some form of national merit, commended/semifinalist/finalist (National)
Extracurriculars (Some EC’s don’t have descriptions yet because I haven’t fully completed the activity to its max yet) (The ones that don’t, I’ve added planning text so you know the extent I’m trying to push it to.)
For Common App:
Guitar Performance & Leadership:
Led 30-member ensemble as Concertmaster; lead guitarist of Blackfire (Battle of the Bands winner); 10 years of study (Rock, Classical, Pop, Jazz).
CAD/Assistive Design:
Designed 5 assistive tools (Fusion 360); applied Von Mises Yield, decreased costs by 44%; deployed in elderly homes; documented reports via Medium.
HIVE (High-fidelity Ionospheric Variability Examiner) (Not Complete Yet)
Independently designed NASA style ionospheric mission for modeling plasma irregularities in the F-region ionosphere. Designed everything including payload deployment plans, systems architecture, and the modeling strategy.
What needs to be done: write paper in AIAA format, get validation/feedback from my research mentor (A professor at George Mason University), (he teaches autonomous systems in robotics), get published on arxiv, and physically design/CAD the deployment mechanism.
Research with Dr. Cameron Nowzari at GMU on autonomous systems in UAVs and drones (Not Complete Yet):
Haven’t done yet, so don’t have description, but I’ll be helping him/grad students on their robotics projects, hoping for tangible results and a glowing letter of rec
NASA Scholars (Not Complete Yet):
VSCS and VASTS NASA programs, Spent the year working on online NASA coursework in advanced topics like spatial telemetry and hardware for divider covers on the ISS. Then was selected out of the 500 students to be part of a specialized summer academy at both Wallops Flight Facility and Langley Research Center, where my group designed a manned mission to mars, and presented the mission to a panel.
Robotics (Not Complete Yet):
Fully designed my subteam’s drivetrain, intake, and outtake. Guaranteed some form of leadership for our subteam in my junior year, and some overall leaderhsip for the club my senior year. Hoping for good competition results.
Sterling Leo Club:
Founded local Leo Club Chapter; scaled membership from 2 to 30. Led 10+ service projects, managing logistics & distribution of 750+ items to families.
Percussion (Marching Band, Indoor Drumline, Concert Band):
Led a 15-member section to unify playing styles into a cohesive sound. Mentored peers in Drum-Corps style repertoire to ensure group-wide precision.
For MIT:
Music Performance/Leadership (Guitar + Percussion):
Concertmaster of a 30-member guitar ensemble and lead guitarist for Blackfire (Battle of the Bands winner); 10 years of multigenre study (Rock, Classical, Pop, Jazz). Led drumline front ensemble as Center Marimba; mentored 15+ members and increased overall ensemble musicality.
CAD/Assistive Design:
Engineered 5 assistive tools (Fusion 360); applied Von Mises Yield Criterion and Finite Element Analysis across 3 design iterations, cutting costs by ~44%; deployed in X elderly homes; published methodology and stress reports on Medium; published open-source designs on Thingiverse.
HIVE (High-fidelity Ionospheric Variability Examiner) (Not Complete Yet)
Independently designed NASA style ionospheric mission for modeling plasma irregularities in the F-region ionosphere. Designed everything including payload deployment plans, systems architecture, and the modeling strategy.
What needs to be done: write paper in AIAA format, get validation/feedback from my research mentor (A professor at George Mason University), (he teaches autonomous systems in robotics), get published on arxiv, and physically design/CAD the deployment mechanism.
Research with Dr. Cameron Nowzari at GMU on autonomous systems in UAVs and drones (Not Complete Yet):
Haven’t done yet, so don’t have description, but I’ll be helping him/grad students on their robotics projects, hoping for tangible results and a glowing letter of rec
Essays/LORs/Other
I haven’t started my essays yet, but I’m striving for them to be at least 8-9/10. Letter of Rec from my guitar teacher, known her for all 4 years of highschool, and she made me section leader in the top guitar ensemble as a sophomore. One more letter of rec from my research mentor at GMU.
Schools
Reach Schools
MIT - Early
Stanford - Regular
Cornell - Regular
Princeton - Regular
Caltech - Regular
UC Berkeley - Regular
UCLA - Regular
UPenn - Regular
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Match Schools
Georgia Tech - Early
UIUC - Early
Purdue - Early
UMD - Early
UVA - Early
RPI - Early
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Safety Schools
VTech - Early
Embry-Riddle - Regular
GMU - Early
Penn State - Early