Hi Everyone, I’m a sophomore, and I’d really like to get into MIT or an Ivy League School. I’m applying as an Aerospace Engineering Major. Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
IMPORTANT
I’m a sophomore, so some of these things are planned, and not yet completed
Demographics
- US citizen
- Virginia (Loudoun County)
- Public Highschool
- Other special factors: None
- Budget: (Not a concern)
Intended Major(s)
Aerospace Engineering
GPA, Rank, and Test Scores
- Unweighted HS GPA: 3.92 As a sophomore, should be a 3.96 when applying
- Weighted HS GPA: 4.32 as a sophomore, should be a 4.5 when applying
- Class Rank: My school doesn’t do class rank
- ACT/SAT Scores: I haven’t taken it yet
List your HS coursework
7th:
Algebra 1: A-
Spanish 1: B+
8th:
Geometry: A+
Spanish 2: A+
9th:
Advanced Guitar Honors: A+
PE 9: A+
Algebra 2 + Trig Honors: A
Intro to AP World History Honors: A-
Research Biology Honors: A
English 9 Honors: A
Spanish 3: A
Summer Course:
PE 10: A+
10th:
Artist Guitar Honors: A+
AP Precalc BC: A
AP World History: A
Research Chemistry Honors: A
English 10 Honors: A
Intro to Engineering Design Honors: A+
Band Honors: A+
11th: (Every grade from here is planned)
Artist Guitar Honors: A+
AP Calc BC: A
APUSH: A
Physics DE: A
AP Lang: A
Principles of Engineering Honors: A+
Band Honors: A+
12th:
Artist Guitar Honors: A+
Multivariable Calc DE: A
AP Gov: A
AP Physics C Mechanics: A
AP Lit: A
Civil Engineering + Architecture Honors: A+
Band Honors: A+
Awards (Definitely my weakest section)
Trinity Grade 8 Certification w/ Distinction from Trinity College in London for Pop and Rock Guitar
All Virginia Guitar 3x
Trying to get National Merit
Trying to get FBLA state or national level award
Extracurriculars (Some EC’s don’t have descriptions yet because I haven’t fully completed the activity to its max yet)
For Common App:
Guitar Performance & Leadership:
Led 30-member ensemble as Concertmaster; lead guitarist of Blackfire (Battle of the Bands winner); 10 years of study (Rock, Classical, Pop, Jazz).
CAD/Assistive Design:
Designed 5 assistive tools for the elderly (Fusion 360); applied Von Mises Yield Criterion to calculate stress levels; documented reports via Medium.
J.A.R.V.I.S:
Developed a JARVIS-inspired HUD via Apple Shortcuts; integrated live sensor fusion to automate tasks for workflow optimization; published on Medium.
Research with a professor at GMU on autonomous systems for UAV’s and Drones:
NASA Scholars:
Robotics:
Sterling Leo Club:
Founded local Leo Club Chapter; scaled membership from 2 to 30. Led X+ service projects, managing logistics & distribution of 750+ items to families.
Percussion (Marching Band, Indoor Drumline, Concert Band):
Advanced from novice to marimbaist in one marching season; mastered Drum Corps style repertoire; mentored 15+ members to increase overall musicality.
For MIT:
Music Performance/Leadership (Guitar + Percussion):
Concertmaster of a 30-member guitar ensemble and lead guitarist for Blackfire (Battle of the Bands winner); 10 years of multigenre study (Rock, Classical, Pop, Jazz). Led drumline front ensemble as Center Marimba; mentored 15+ members and increased overall ensemble musicality.
CAD/Assistive Design:
Engineered five assistive tools using Fusion 360; applied Von Mises Yield Criterion and Finite Element Analysis to optimize structural integrity; decreased cost by 44% on average. Documented technical methodology and stress reports on Medium; published all designs open-source on Thingiverse.
J.A.R.V.I.S.
Developed a JARVIS-inspired iOS HUD using Apple Shortcuts to automate tasks such as scheduling and geolocation. Engineered a modular framework for workflow optimization; published a technical guide on Medium to share my approach to personalized mobile productivity automations.
Research with a professor at GMU on autonomous systems for UAV’s and Drones:
Essays/LORs/Other
I haven’t started my essays yet
Schools
Reach Schools
MIT - Early
Stanford - Regular
Cornell - Regular
Princeton - Regular
UPenn - Regular
UC Berkeley - Regular
Harvard - Regular
Georgia Tech - Early
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Match Schools
UIUC - Early
Purdue - Early
UMD - Early
UVA - Early
VTech - Early
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Safety Schools
Embry-Riddle - Regular
GMU - Early