<p>Hi, I’m a transfer applicant for Fall 2013, applying to NYU, BU and Northeastern as a Neuroscience major.
I have written two short answers for extracurriculars essay - one about an academic club and the other about a hobby. I can’t decide which one to use, so it would be great if somebody could give them a read and tell me which one is better.
I know these are not so important, but NYU is my dream school and it’s pretty selective, so I need my essays to shine since I’m unsure of my GPA.</p>