Can someone read over my UVA essay for me?

Colleges & Universities University of Virginia
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<p>I can email or private message. I had two friends read it and got mixed feeling about it.</p>

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<p>i’ll read it. <a href="mailto:ashishbhandari007@gmail.com">ashishbhandari007@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>I can also read it if u would like. <a href="mailto:comchief@gmail.com">comchief@gmail.com</a></p>