Can someone review my first draft of the personal statement?

I started writing my Common App essay/personal statement for the 2024 application cycle, and I’ve just finished my outline/rough draft. I would really appreciate it if anyone could look over it and provide suggestions. My goal is to perfect the essay this year.

@compmom, you’ve reviewed my previous essays, and I’d be happy if you could review this one too!

@popsiclclcle, please follow our process for essay reviews. It’s here:

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I am sorry. I’ve created a new thread in the essay feedback community.

Of course I will help. I will respond on the other thread as well.

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