Can this sound any nicer??

Pre-College Topics High School Life
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<p>Ok so I have to send my honors bio teacher an email because I am really really REALLY in need of an A… here it is</p>

<p>Teachers name:
Sorry for bothering you again but I had a quick question I would like to pass by you, Since we have a couple more assignments before the end of the quarter and I should be pretty close to recieving an , I was wondering if you would be able to let me do anything extra to boost my grade up a couple of points because I am willing to do anything.
Thanks!
My name…</p>

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<p>If I were you, I’d get rid of “because I am willing to do anything.” It makes you sound extremely desperate…</p>

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<p>What’s your grade dude?</p>

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<p>Or you can do better next quarter?</p>

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<p>After the assignments it should be an 89 :frowning: SO ANNOYING</p>

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<p>Or 88. something</p>

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<p>Why don’t you just ask him/her in person? They’re less likely to deny you that way.</p>