Looking for feedback on all aspects of my application.
Demographics
- US domestic (US citizen or permanent resident) Domestic, US Citizen.
- State/Location of residency: * Connecticut, NYC Metropolitan Area.
- Type of high school *: Top public high school
- Gender/Race/Ethnicity (optional): Female/White/Irish +Ashkenazi Jewish
- Other special factors (first generation to college, legacy, athlete, etc.): N/A
Intended Major(s): Art history, history, philosophy.
GPA, Rank, and Test Scores:
- Unweighted HS GPA: 3.98
- Weighted HS GPA (incl. weighting system): 4.2
- Class Rank: School does not rank.
- ACT/SAT Scores: 32 ACT. 36 Reading, 36 English, 32 Science, 25 Math.
Coursework
Freshman year - Advanced English, regular for everything else. Freshman are not allowed to take APs freshman year, and there are no honors history/humanities courses besides English.
Sophomore - AP Euro (5), Honors World History, English Honors. Regular STEM classes. Sophomores are only allowed to take one AP. Keep in mind for these 4 years I am also taking Latin and arts courses. Unfortunately there are no honors Latin courses.
Junior - AP Bio, AP Lang, APUSH, AP Art History (self-studied). Honors Drawing & Painting. Grade level math (Algebra 2). Took on two independent studies: one in art history and another in contemporary poetry. Also took online courses via Coursera.
Senior - AP Lit, AP Law & Gov. Honors Physics. Might self study AP World and/or AP Art. Continuing my independent study in contemporary poetry, plus helping out with teaching a Sophomore poetry class. Literature and Philosophy elective–unique. My schedule was horrible to figure out this year; very few APs could fit into it. Going to ask my counselor to explain these circumstances.
Awards:
- Scholastic Writing Gold Key, Scholastic Writing Honorable Mention x2, Scholastic Art Honorable Mention
- School award for top English student in my class
- Latin Seal of Biliteracy Advanced level,
- National Honors Society, National English Honors Society, National Junior Classical League.
- Certificate of Participation (lol) from Harvard Essay Contest.
Extracurriculars
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Editor-in-chief of an independent poetry criticism publication. Publish introspective analyses on contemporary poems to cultivate appreciation of the artform. Create analysis contests to draw students to the page.
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Volunteer Online Archivist/Transcriber for Library of Congress, The National Archives, The Smithsonian. 350+ contributions.
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Volunteering at Local Historical Society and Town Museum
- Research conducted through Historical Society. Work as a docent and and archivist. Maintain records. Created a research project on a local town eccentric from the 19th/20th century, advisor said I had uncovered knowledge about them that even he did not know despite his research of this person.
- Currently working on a project that involves recording an oral history of my town. Involves interviewing senior residents/persons of distinguished families and explaining the history surrounding them. Planning to a book to showcase work.
4.Currently working on a personal art history research paper (intentionally vague). Planning to subject to a couple of journals by the end of this summer- Concord Review, et cetera.
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Drew portraits for orphans and immigrant children through my school’s Art Club.
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Volunteer assistant educator for a children’s program at local nature center. Create/execute educational sessions about the care of animals and nature.
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Volunteered at local youth center. My main responsibility was to supervise the kids as to ensure their safety and cultivate an environment of inclusivity and respect. At least 70+ hours, did not record hours properly.
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I don’t know whether to mention this stuff on my CommonApp. I draw, paint and I read a lot in my free time. Last year I read 50 books. I am also a Wikipedia editor.
Essays/LORs/Other
Essays:
- Have not written essays yet. Topics I’m thinking about include elaborating on the value of my transcription/archivist work to wanting to grow up be a nun when I was a kid (I was not raised religious whatsoever). Really difficult for me to settle on an idea but I know I can write well. If anyone has advice, let me know!
LORs :
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Junior English teacher - Not written yet, said I was the best student in his class, and one of the best writers he’s ever taught. He offered to write a letter of rec for me before I even asked or thought about it. Seems very eager to write my letter; says it won’t be a difficult write for him at all as he has a lot to say about me. Presumably going to be a good if not great letter.
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Advisor to my independent study of contemporary poetry - He’s the head of the English department and I have known him since middle school. He knows me very personally. Thinks I am very capable and entrusts me with a lot of official tasks and responsibilities (having me teach some of his poetry class next year, had me make educational materials for a school literature abroad program). Think he will be able to speak to my personality quite well.
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Guidance counselor - Not super close, but I’m definitely closer to her than most students. I bake her cookies and give her a thank you note every year. Knows how frustrated I am with limited course rigor.
Additional Info
Throughout freshman and sophomore year, I struggled a lot with symptoms of autoimmune encephalitis. I experience less symptoms now. Not sure whether I should mention this or not.
Cost Constraints / Budget: High income family/top 1%. Will not be receiving financial aid, have a 529 plan to pay for college.
Schools
Ultra-Reaches: Wellesley [likely ED], Williams, Swarthmore, Brown, UChicago, Middlebury
Reaches - Wesleyan, Vassar, Washington and Lee, Colgate, Smith, Haverford (uncle legacy?).
Targets: Bryn Mawr (aunt legacy?), University of Rochester, Mount Holyoke, George Washington University, Kenyon, Skidmore