Demographics
- US domestic student (US citizen)
- State/Location of residency: pennsylvania
- Type of high school: public, graduation class of about 400
- Gender/Race/Ethnicity: white and nonbinary/genderqueer
- Other special factors: first gen, disabled (type two narcolepsy, autistic, etc etc), low income (only parent is a single mom with approx 30k/year salary), homeless for about a month in junior year due to DV situation throughout HS
Intended Major(s)
- major in microbiology
- enrollment in infectious disease program
- minor in german language
GPA, Rank, and Test Scores
- Unweighted HS GPA: not applicable (school does not calculate)
- Weighted HS GPA: 3.9 out of 4.0
- Class Rank: 51 of 379 (top 10% throughout middle school and freshman year, dropped due to disability + other personal factors)
- ACT/SAT Scores: submitted sat score of 1390 (tried to pull but unable), no act score
Coursework
- 2 ap classes and 3 ap exams: AP language and composition (scored 2 :'(, and did not have my accommadations yet, but achieved straight As in the class), AP biology (not taken yet, but consistent 90s through most of the year), and taking AP german test (not taken yet)
- 3 dual enrollment classes: german 3, german 4, honors pre-calculus taken through seton hill university; A average in both german courses and B average in pre-calc
- calculus 1 level of math
- 4 years of german (one of the highest ranking in my class, and kept over 100% consistently throughout grades 9-11)
- college prep courses: calculus 1, organic chemistry, biology 2 (epidemiology)
- no “unusual” academic courses, but i took four years of both band and choir along with a few arts classes
- all honors student from elementary age to sophomore year, and took honors math and english junior year. college prep classes in math, english, and german along with ap and college prep sciences senior year
- generally an A student with a B or two, though I have gotten 1 C this year and a C in honors geometry sophomore year
- incredibly studious with an overachieving mindset, and told to study as much as humanly possible to get into a good college
- in seven honors societies (NHS, NAHS for art, TRI-M for music, math honors society, GNHS for foreign language, NEHS for english, and SNHS for science)
- global scholar since freshman year
Awards
- helen hepler social studies award recipient of class of 2024 female class in middle school (high GPA across all three years, incredibly prestigious in my community)
- top 10% GPA in grades 6-9
Extracurriculars
- two years of retail experience (cashier for two years in june 2024, and retail associate at hot topic for about 1.5 years); working full-time during the summer and part-time during the school year
- raised over $1,500 myself in work for a local nonprofit for muscular dystrophy in 2023 to help provide for my mom and i during homelessness and to help others
- several years of experience working with children through many volunteer opportunities
- 100+ service hours through my honor societies to give back to my community
- in marching band (flute 9+10, piccolo 11+12) and concert band (flute 3-12 and piccolo 12); no leadership
- in concert choir (soprano 1 9, alto 2 10-12) throughout high school; alto section leader grades 11 and 12
- participant in school wind ensemble as piccolo senior year
- participant in faywest honors band as first seat flute senior year
- participant in county choir junior year as alto 2
- performed at pearl harbor (10th), san antonio fiesta parade (11th), and disney parade (12th) through marching band
- performed at carnegie hall (11th) and washington DC (12th) through choir
- auditioned for district band on flute senior year (didn’t get in, rip. still came even though my school was under lockdown due to an attempted school shooting)
- participated in my school’s reading competition team (WIRC) freshman and sophomore year. took a gap year junior year, and couldn’t participate senior year due to the band trip to disney being during comp date
- GSA president sophomore and junior year. the sponsor was transferred to another school due to construction plans on the HS, disbanding the GSA club
- i might be forgetting some things, but the point is that i balance a lot in and outside of school! i feel this proves that i am able to handle college coursework AND other aspects of college life
Essays/LORs/Other
- i feel my essays are pretty strong
- my personal essay discusses how my mom inspires me to stay determined and never give up (cancer survivor WHILE PREGNANT with me, broke her back in her 20s, protected me and helped me go to carnegie hall despite homelessness due to DV, fought for my advocacy during my narcolepsy diagnosis and towards ableism throughout my academic career, etc). i know it’s corny and a common topic, but she has really gone through a lot and truly taught me what endurance is
- my other essays included discussion of the connection between my neurodivergency and my career of choice and how becoming disabled at 16 due to long covid has shaped me as a person. i also left a note regarding my lower than average stats due to my neurological disability (my narcolepsy greatly affects my learning, as my information processing is a lot slower than my peers and i deal with severe fatigue daily, making it hard to focus on tests etc. i didn’t use it as an excuse, more as an explanation; i was undiagnosed throughout most of my high school career)
- only able to receive one LOR from my organic chemistry teacher who i have done several volunteer opportunities with AND known since i was a kid (vouched to take his class as a 3rd grader, haha. i stuck to my word!)
- unable to receive other LORs due to many of my teachers being booked up
Cost Constraints / Budget
- unsure due to my mom’s low income; i will likely have to raise most of the costs myself. i qualify for over $12,000 of financial aid through my FAFSA estimate, including the maximum pell grant
- i receive free school lunches and got fee waivers through the college board for sats and price reductions for ap tests
- i plan on applying to several scholarships to help raise money for college, and i am working on finding a seasonal job that pays more than my current so i can work full-time to save for college and potentially a service dog if funds permit
Schools
[ AFFORDABILITY IS TBD WHEN I GET MY FINANCIAL AID PACKAGES ]
[ APPLIED ALL REGULAR DECISION ]
- Safety
- got accepted into all of my safetys!
- Likely
- University of Pittsburgh - Main Campus (primary concern is how late my application went into review; i dont know if there will be room for admission, and acception for freshman is around 50%!) - TOP CHOICE
- Accepted Into
- Seton Hill University w/h $26,000 grant (i also have nearly $8,000 saved through Jump for Heart fundraising) - SECOND CHOICE
- Slippery Rock University
- Duquesne University w/h $24,000 grant and accepted into honors program
- California University of Pennsylvania and accepted into honors program
- Indiana University of Pennsylvania and accepted into honors program
- Virginia Tech - DREAM SCHOOL (likely won’t be able to attend due to finances and the process of finding medical professionals out of state)
- Reach
- University of Pennsylvania (i know i likely won’t get in, but thought it was worth a shot)
- Denied
- Carnegie Mellon University (rip)
be honest, especially about upenn. i know i very likely won’t get in, but i feel like there is a slim chance that i could luck out (and i also want to feel better in general lol, i am pretty insecure). wishing all of my fellow upenn applicants good luck!