Critique my poem?

<p>Can someone please critique my poem? I'll PM it to you. Thanks :)</p>

<p>I could; I'd appreciate the chance to take a break from cramming to review something.</p>

<p>You should check out Young</a> Writers Society • Home, where you can post your work and get critiques from other young writers all over the world. :D Shameless plug, I know, but it's a really cool website.</p>