[ color=green]**Decision: Accepted, Engineering **[/color]
Dean’s Scholarship, $80k
Objective:
SAT I : 1580= 800M / 780CRW / 17 Essay
SAT I superscore: same as above
ACT: 34= 33E / 35M / 32R / 34S
ACT superscore: only took it once
SAT II: Chemistry, 800; Math 2, 800
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0):
Weighted GPA: 4.42
Rank: 7/287 (top 3%)
AP: Chemistry (5)
IB: N/A
Senior Year Course Load: Calc BC AP, Physics C Mechanics AP, French V AP, Human Geo AP, English 12 H Global Literature, Concert Band H, Chamber Choir H
Number of other EA applicants in your school: not sure
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel, etc.): nah
Common Awards (AP Scholar, honor roll, NM things, etc.): Honor roll, National Merit commended student
Subjective:
Extracurriculars: Concert Band (9-12, Section Leader 12), Flute Choir (6-12, outside of school), GSA (9-12, Co-President 11-12), Math Team (9-12, Captain 12), Chorus (10-12), Wind Ensemble (11-12, same outside organization as Flute Choirs), NHS (11-12), Drama (11, named role in one musical), Flute Ensemble (11-12, this was new my Jr. year and through my HS)
Job/Work Experience: none
Volunteer/Community Service: insignificant music things and NHS
Summer Experience: Woodwinds (Music camp) at NYU Summer 2017
Writing (Subject, 1-10 rating, details):
Essays: For my Common App essay I wrote about the idea of “fitting in” and comparing myself to others, and how my identity transcends relation to others (I’m queer and Filipino and my HS is 97% white), 10/10.
Teacher Recommendation #1: From my beloved Chemistry teacher, whom I had for 2 years (Honors then AP), we got along really well and I worked really hard in her class, 10/10. (didn’t read)
Teacher Recommendation #2: didn’t send one
Counselor Rec: My school’s guidance dept isn’t that great and my guidance counselor didn’t actually know me that well, but she did like me a lot and thought highly of me so 7.5/10
Additional Info/Rec: N/A
Interview: N/A
Art Supplement: N/A
Other
Date Submitted App: 10/29
U.S. State/Territory or Country: Massachusetts
School Type: Public
Ethnicity: Filipino
Gender: Male
Income Bracket Range: 80-100k
Hooks (URM, first generation, recruited athelete, development): Single parent (idk if that says anything), self identified as gay in my essay
Reflection
Strengths: GPA and Test scores, personal essay, extracurriculars, teacher rec
Weaknesses: SAT essay
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: Overall strong student with good grades and test scores and strong extracurriculars
What would you have done differently?: Maybe get a second teacher rec, or try for a better SAT essay
Where else did you apply? UMass Amherst (accepted, Honors College), BU, Brandeis, Brown, Columbia, NYU, Syracuse, Tufts
Other Factors:
General Comments & Advice:
Nothing (other than the SAT) I did was to make me look better for college apps, I did everything because it was what I wanted to do; I feel like colleges can tell when you’re being fake. Also, keep your grades up!